Gedicht over LSD
- Onderwerp starter Angramar Temenos
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Suggesties. Kom met bewijzen en laat die gast voor die tijd in zijn waarde met zijn gedicht.
Als hij iets stoms post mag je er best wat van zeggen, maar dit is alleen persoonlijk aanvallen. Durf te wedden dat als het om iemand anders ging je die conclusie niet getrokken zou hebben.
Je snapt het niet. Lees het eens goed door. Denk er eens goed over na, dan zal je de antwoorden zelf vinden. Wat betreft de incinuatie dat ik hem gewoon moet hebben ofzo zal ik wel zeggen dat ik in de eerste post dan echt niet zo subtiel was geweest. En dan had ik in zo ongeveer al z'n topics met een dergelijke post gestaan.
Maar dat vind ik dus echt dingen die je zelf moet kunnen bedenken. Vanaf nu gewoon ff nadenken want ik ga dit soort simpele dingen niet blijven voorkauwen. Ik ben geen kleuterjuffrouw.
Maar dat vind ik dus echt dingen die je zelf moet kunnen bedenken. Vanaf nu gewoon ff nadenken want ik ga dit soort simpele dingen niet blijven voorkauwen. Ik ben geen kleuterjuffrouw.
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Ik zie er juist geen ervaring met LSD in, de omschrijving van het effect is precies hoe het altijd omschreven wordt door mensen die er géén ervaring mee hebben. De cliché effecten, die iedereen verwacht. Er zijn dingen die je veel meer terug vind in verhalen van mensen die wel ervaring hebben en die ontbreken hier dus volledig.
Zo bedoelde ik het ook niet. Dat is gewoon het meest waarschijnlijke als iemand zoiets zou schrijven. Het kan m,akkelijk door iemand zonder ervaring geschreven zijn wat dat betreft. Dat zijn dingen die ik er duidelijker bij had moeten zetten. Het voornaamste punt is het verschil in Engels van dit en zijn eerdere ''i hait ppl'' tekst.
De voornaamste aanleiding was overigens een ander gedicht over LSD dat inmiddels gepost is, daardoor kwam ik hier weer op. En het feit dat niemand het door leek te hebben. Het is inderdaad zo dat ik in feite niks kan bewijzen. En ik kan dus ook niks als zekerheid stellen. Maar hij heeft in ieder geval alle schijn tegen momenteel.
Deze persoon is een sitting duck dus als ik een pispaaltje nodig zou hebben was hij ideaal geweest. Maar daar ben ik niet op uit. Ik hoop dat de motivatie hiermee duidelijk is. Ik ben er niet op uit om leugenaars te ontmaskeren en zowel je leugen als je waarheid kunnen mij vaak gestolen worden.
Als je leugen echter inspirerend is kan je weleens met mij te maken krijgen. En dat hoeft helemaal niet ongezellig te zijn.
De voornaamste aanleiding was overigens een ander gedicht over LSD dat inmiddels gepost is, daardoor kwam ik hier weer op. En het feit dat niemand het door leek te hebben. Het is inderdaad zo dat ik in feite niks kan bewijzen. En ik kan dus ook niks als zekerheid stellen. Maar hij heeft in ieder geval alle schijn tegen momenteel.
Deze persoon is een sitting duck dus als ik een pispaaltje nodig zou hebben was hij ideaal geweest. Maar daar ben ik niet op uit. Ik hoop dat de motivatie hiermee duidelijk is. Ik ben er niet op uit om leugenaars te ontmaskeren en zowel je leugen als je waarheid kunnen mij vaak gestolen worden.
Als je leugen echter inspirerend is kan je weleens met mij te maken krijgen. En dat hoeft helemaal niet ongezellig te zijn.
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Ik vind het een leuk gedicht om in het poezie album van je kleine nichtje te schrijven!
Ja, dat is wat ik er van vind!
Ja, dat is wat ik er van vind!
Angramar Temenos
Badass junkie
Nou het is zover, heb de eerste keer "echt" LSD gedaan zaterdag. Agaza, drientje en nog meerder ervan waren erbij, dus...
Oh en, hier heb je nog wat meer gedichten van mij (niet drugs gerelateerd), kijk maar of de schrijfstijl overeen komt.
Vendetta - Songtext, geschreven voor een metalbandje van mijn vrienden.
Ten storms, light force, daemons promise
Numquam suade mihi vana
They've always said what you are to be
No salvation for those who reject me!
Wasn't part of the bargain
broke your pact once again
Sin harvest, blood vengance
All hail the wraiven king!
I'm your deviant delight
Secrets, the sinful blight
Ipse venena bibas
Sunt mala quae libas
Come my one, show me sin's rest
Rejection will prove to be end manifest
Sin of exile, terrible smile
Death of heart, my traitor angel
Wasn't part of the bargain
broke your pact once again
Sin harvest, blood vengance
All hail the wraiven king!
Wasn't part of the pact
Seperation before all age's end
Broke honor, freedom's demise
Harvest your sin, you are mine
Withbourne, hellspawn, lich-wraith
What the hell are your words to me?!
You pray for hope, pray for light
No salvation for those who reject me!
Wasn't part of the bargain
broke your pact once again
Sin harvest, blood vengance
All hail the wraiven king!
Bittersweet tragedy - Random gedicht
Let me fly trough the emerald clouds
See below me the very world i renounce
Storm along with the crystal dream
Live the life that i wasn't meant to live
It's my world that bittersweet tragedy
Come with me to the stars high above
I'll show you that i can pluck them
From those skies, so far out of reach
I'll take you a journey to the whispering gardens
Show you the mystery of the scintillant light
The paradise of those lost to time so far away
Just promise me you'll never lead me astray
This is the lost one's last stand
Take our chance and lead me to my beloved land
So jump with me and give me sanctuary
Prove to me that my light is not a fallacy!
Accompany me on my moonlit quest
Challenge the hand of fate together
Sail through the starlit lagoons of neverland
Know that in the end we can force fate's hand!
I know that many will fall, i know many try to hide
That darkening hypocrisy and lies so deep inside
Let me know we do not belong with them much longer
We won't rot on the inside, true magic is far stronger!
It's my world that bittersweet tragedy
Come with me to the stars high above
I'll show you that i can pluck them
From those skies, so far out of reach!
Runefaust and Ragnarok
Atropos, at high skies, ragnarok nigh
Six million from midgard, and thousand times that
432.000 from walhalla, ready to die
Ready for battle, runefaust face glory!
Blood, wrath, storm and gore
Living and dead, ready to charge
Here come they and here stand we
Come brethren, there's no turning back!
World to be devoured, choking fate
Einherjar and man, war against onslaught
Hordes endless, glory to the last war
Might of our hearts, heroes of light
Hungry Hordes, by thousands they fall
Glory to the great, end of our era
For love, hate, glory and suffering
Bulwark of our world, perserve our kind
Flesh and blood, war on shadow and magic!
Blood, wrath, storm and gore
Living and the dead, ready to charge
Here come they and here stand we
Come brethren, there's no turning back!
Terror of runefaust, comes to an end
Death and glory are our price for freedom
Axe, heart, steel, blood and courage
Wrath of us unleashed, the arcana bow!
Side by side, we stand, brothers, we die
Breathe, scream not mercy, scream freedom!
Our time, last stand, runefaust advances
Wrath ragnarok, battle to the blasted horizons!
By thousands they fall, to death we march
Our world has come at an end, next journey is nigh
I've died a heroes death, the feast awaits!
Brethren take up steel one last time
Tonight we shall drink in Asgard!
Blood, wrath, storm and gore
Living and dead, ready to charge
Here come they and here stand we
Come brethren, there's no turning back!
Abyssala - Magnum opus
Risen up to grasp the glory of sunfire
Wreathed in voidfires of the nether reaches
I've awakened from my diabolical nightmare
Only to take a promise of empty salvation
You have left me alone in the unknown
Took me high and far to the skies above
You illuminated the road to paradise
Only to release me so high to fall again
The concepts of life have failed me
Thought I'd find my way in time
Break the chains of neverending circles
"We're the redeemers in the most solemn moment"
I was tempted these new riddles to solve
Wished for only for you to take me away
And for you to never, never lead me astray
Wishes come true in dreams and dreams alone
I've been granted only infernal deliverance
Falling into the great dark beyond
The ephemeral mind of endless sentience
"We're the saviors of most ancient of days"
I've been called to the brink of a new world
Only you could show me the way to those infinite plains
You alone saved from the deep, dark ocean
Pass in fantasy of the whispering gardens...
My victory over eternity has been a hollow one
The promised salvation granted to me... an empty one
Every mystery unbound, every riddle solved...
"We're the the salvation of the haunted..."
A hand to reach out from both sides of the crystal mirror
The call for salvation from both light and darkness
Yet only darkness reaches out to those heights
To it's image in this twilit mirror
But tell us can we ever help it in this world
Can we restrain the underlying fear, that we all hear?
Ever undo the very failure in the foundation of life?
"We bring light and mercy to those in need!"
Mercy.. What mercy has this world shown to me, now?
For once upon a century to dream of you...
To be freed from the murky depths, by you, only by you.
For all our fears to now come undone...
Count the times of betrayal against me
Insanity everywhere around me but i am marked
Have we brought upon ourself to suffer the misery?
"We are the greedy liars humanity desires!"
"In the name of asgard itself, you lie, prophet!"
I've brought the last drop of effort in my dream
Marched to hell and beyond for you alone
Conquered the skies only to forever fly to you...
Or is the mistake not for us to find
Lost within us, lost within our minds
The only repentance.. for the sin of life..
Is to find all life's creation come undone
Yes... i cannot reach the light.. can never.. reach..
"For you alone would i fly, for you alone"
"Was tempted by new mysteries of light eternal"
For what, you fools! Away, you hellish fiends!
The last words of the magimaster of the millenium
Forlorn lore containing the secrets of life
Forever doomed to be forgotten as life cannot fathom
The infinite knowledge bound within a few words alone
"He rode the storm only to reach her, but why did he fall"
"Mastered this world yet is forever out of reach..."
"Take her to the kingdom in the skies above!"
"Madness.. madness.. Away!
I'll banish you back to the cold dark beyond!"
Hope, what do you speak off?!
What can you hope to accomplish by fighting for your lives?!
I'll sear your souls to dust and banish the dust over the seven seas!
Chaos.. Destruction... Oblivion.. Such is the way now.
"Unfaithfulness..."
Depravity!
"Madness..."
Confusion!
"Betrayal..."
Chaos!
"These are the hallmarks..."
And those are the pillars!
The last word of the Magimaster..
Chronos et Pathos - meer dan 2 jaar geleden geschreven. (staat ook op mijn deviantart)
I sail only this frail ocean of wishes and dreams
On this ship of dueling reality and mind's figmentation
Promising salvation in these decadent themes
Bringing the prophecy of deliverance to realization
To find you in this new age is the miracle of my existence
Somewhat confounding, couldn't bear the shame
Flying the celestial horizons to find the limits of deviance
A victim unwished in this spectral game
Couldn't know before the requiem played the last note
Wasting my existence storming towards you in this empty crusade
A thieves delight, a spies weapon, a liars fame
Feeling is a draconic curse to deliver man into deaths cascade
Imprisoned within the boundaries of failure
To ever reach the highest peaks that i always fear
This impregnable spiral, where my inside ruptures
Oh sister of the fallen ones, she will come soon my dear
As cowardice before inflicted this seal of silence
Now that manipulation unveils the hideous truth
Where these cosmic planes collide after an aeon of latency
I step forwards into the abyss without regret!
As for the era's ahead that i will never see
Mourn not for me, willingly chained in hell
Without my cruel grasp thou shalth be free!
Forget this divine failure and live on for another tale to tell!
Oh en, hier heb je nog wat meer gedichten van mij (niet drugs gerelateerd), kijk maar of de schrijfstijl overeen komt.
Vendetta - Songtext, geschreven voor een metalbandje van mijn vrienden.
Ten storms, light force, daemons promise
Numquam suade mihi vana
They've always said what you are to be
No salvation for those who reject me!
Wasn't part of the bargain
broke your pact once again
Sin harvest, blood vengance
All hail the wraiven king!
I'm your deviant delight
Secrets, the sinful blight
Ipse venena bibas
Sunt mala quae libas
Come my one, show me sin's rest
Rejection will prove to be end manifest
Sin of exile, terrible smile
Death of heart, my traitor angel
Wasn't part of the bargain
broke your pact once again
Sin harvest, blood vengance
All hail the wraiven king!
Wasn't part of the pact
Seperation before all age's end
Broke honor, freedom's demise
Harvest your sin, you are mine
Withbourne, hellspawn, lich-wraith
What the hell are your words to me?!
You pray for hope, pray for light
No salvation for those who reject me!
Wasn't part of the bargain
broke your pact once again
Sin harvest, blood vengance
All hail the wraiven king!
Bittersweet tragedy - Random gedicht
Let me fly trough the emerald clouds
See below me the very world i renounce
Storm along with the crystal dream
Live the life that i wasn't meant to live
It's my world that bittersweet tragedy
Come with me to the stars high above
I'll show you that i can pluck them
From those skies, so far out of reach
I'll take you a journey to the whispering gardens
Show you the mystery of the scintillant light
The paradise of those lost to time so far away
Just promise me you'll never lead me astray
This is the lost one's last stand
Take our chance and lead me to my beloved land
So jump with me and give me sanctuary
Prove to me that my light is not a fallacy!
Accompany me on my moonlit quest
Challenge the hand of fate together
Sail through the starlit lagoons of neverland
Know that in the end we can force fate's hand!
I know that many will fall, i know many try to hide
That darkening hypocrisy and lies so deep inside
Let me know we do not belong with them much longer
We won't rot on the inside, true magic is far stronger!
It's my world that bittersweet tragedy
Come with me to the stars high above
I'll show you that i can pluck them
From those skies, so far out of reach!
Runefaust and Ragnarok
Atropos, at high skies, ragnarok nigh
Six million from midgard, and thousand times that
432.000 from walhalla, ready to die
Ready for battle, runefaust face glory!
Blood, wrath, storm and gore
Living and dead, ready to charge
Here come they and here stand we
Come brethren, there's no turning back!
World to be devoured, choking fate
Einherjar and man, war against onslaught
Hordes endless, glory to the last war
Might of our hearts, heroes of light
Hungry Hordes, by thousands they fall
Glory to the great, end of our era
For love, hate, glory and suffering
Bulwark of our world, perserve our kind
Flesh and blood, war on shadow and magic!
Blood, wrath, storm and gore
Living and the dead, ready to charge
Here come they and here stand we
Come brethren, there's no turning back!
Terror of runefaust, comes to an end
Death and glory are our price for freedom
Axe, heart, steel, blood and courage
Wrath of us unleashed, the arcana bow!
Side by side, we stand, brothers, we die
Breathe, scream not mercy, scream freedom!
Our time, last stand, runefaust advances
Wrath ragnarok, battle to the blasted horizons!
By thousands they fall, to death we march
Our world has come at an end, next journey is nigh
I've died a heroes death, the feast awaits!
Brethren take up steel one last time
Tonight we shall drink in Asgard!
Blood, wrath, storm and gore
Living and dead, ready to charge
Here come they and here stand we
Come brethren, there's no turning back!
Abyssala - Magnum opus
Risen up to grasp the glory of sunfire
Wreathed in voidfires of the nether reaches
I've awakened from my diabolical nightmare
Only to take a promise of empty salvation
You have left me alone in the unknown
Took me high and far to the skies above
You illuminated the road to paradise
Only to release me so high to fall again
The concepts of life have failed me
Thought I'd find my way in time
Break the chains of neverending circles
"We're the redeemers in the most solemn moment"
I was tempted these new riddles to solve
Wished for only for you to take me away
And for you to never, never lead me astray
Wishes come true in dreams and dreams alone
I've been granted only infernal deliverance
Falling into the great dark beyond
The ephemeral mind of endless sentience
"We're the saviors of most ancient of days"
I've been called to the brink of a new world
Only you could show me the way to those infinite plains
You alone saved from the deep, dark ocean
Pass in fantasy of the whispering gardens...
My victory over eternity has been a hollow one
The promised salvation granted to me... an empty one
Every mystery unbound, every riddle solved...
"We're the the salvation of the haunted..."
A hand to reach out from both sides of the crystal mirror
The call for salvation from both light and darkness
Yet only darkness reaches out to those heights
To it's image in this twilit mirror
But tell us can we ever help it in this world
Can we restrain the underlying fear, that we all hear?
Ever undo the very failure in the foundation of life?
"We bring light and mercy to those in need!"
Mercy.. What mercy has this world shown to me, now?
For once upon a century to dream of you...
To be freed from the murky depths, by you, only by you.
For all our fears to now come undone...
Count the times of betrayal against me
Insanity everywhere around me but i am marked
Have we brought upon ourself to suffer the misery?
"We are the greedy liars humanity desires!"
"In the name of asgard itself, you lie, prophet!"
I've brought the last drop of effort in my dream
Marched to hell and beyond for you alone
Conquered the skies only to forever fly to you...
Or is the mistake not for us to find
Lost within us, lost within our minds
The only repentance.. for the sin of life..
Is to find all life's creation come undone
Yes... i cannot reach the light.. can never.. reach..
"For you alone would i fly, for you alone"
"Was tempted by new mysteries of light eternal"
For what, you fools! Away, you hellish fiends!
The last words of the magimaster of the millenium
Forlorn lore containing the secrets of life
Forever doomed to be forgotten as life cannot fathom
The infinite knowledge bound within a few words alone
"He rode the storm only to reach her, but why did he fall"
"Mastered this world yet is forever out of reach..."
"Take her to the kingdom in the skies above!"
"Madness.. madness.. Away!
I'll banish you back to the cold dark beyond!"
Hope, what do you speak off?!
What can you hope to accomplish by fighting for your lives?!
I'll sear your souls to dust and banish the dust over the seven seas!
Chaos.. Destruction... Oblivion.. Such is the way now.
"Unfaithfulness..."
Depravity!
"Madness..."
Confusion!
"Betrayal..."
Chaos!
"These are the hallmarks..."
And those are the pillars!
The last word of the Magimaster..
Chronos et Pathos - meer dan 2 jaar geleden geschreven. (staat ook op mijn deviantart)
I sail only this frail ocean of wishes and dreams
On this ship of dueling reality and mind's figmentation
Promising salvation in these decadent themes
Bringing the prophecy of deliverance to realization
To find you in this new age is the miracle of my existence
Somewhat confounding, couldn't bear the shame
Flying the celestial horizons to find the limits of deviance
A victim unwished in this spectral game
Couldn't know before the requiem played the last note
Wasting my existence storming towards you in this empty crusade
A thieves delight, a spies weapon, a liars fame
Feeling is a draconic curse to deliver man into deaths cascade
Imprisoned within the boundaries of failure
To ever reach the highest peaks that i always fear
This impregnable spiral, where my inside ruptures
Oh sister of the fallen ones, she will come soon my dear
As cowardice before inflicted this seal of silence
Now that manipulation unveils the hideous truth
Where these cosmic planes collide after an aeon of latency
I step forwards into the abyss without regret!
As for the era's ahead that i will never see
Mourn not for me, willingly chained in hell
Without my cruel grasp thou shalth be free!
Forget this divine failure and live on for another tale to tell!
Angramar Temenos
Badass junkie
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Ondanks dat het daar aan doet denken ben ik geen depressieve kutemo.
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